Yayy, finally I have completed this second part of the course, I finished my assignment piece!
It has been since June last year when I finished with all the projects exercises and left to do just the final assignment
piece which I just couldn’t find the time to do it! I was very pregnant then, working full time, 7 days a week, being really hot during the day,.. getting ready for the baby,..baby suppose to arrive 28 of October and according to my planning I was going to do it during the 4 weeks I was taking off before the arrival but, baby Zoe decided to arrive 3 weeks earlier! 🙂 Very thankful to my then tutor Minacha and my new tutor now, Hilary, for being supportive and flexible with my deadlines.Â
For the assignment piece we were to select and draw natural objects, add a plant or vase of flowers in and put something contrasting in the background, jug or a bottle, the subject and media were our choise.
Bellow is the checklist I was using trying to do my best to show all of these in this final piece:
-an understanding of the use of colour in drawing
– an understanding of the most appropriate choice of medium for the subject and skill in using itÂ
-the ability to set up an interesting composition
-variety in mark-making, depth, contrast, tone
-accuracy and demonstrable understanding of form
During the exercises I did different regular fruit and vegetables, so for this drawing I decided to do exotic fruits, which I haven’t done. As we were to add plant or vase of flowers in the drawing, I didn’t want to use vase of flowers because I knew will take me few days to do the drawing and flowers wont last long, I had to do it around the baby and baby Zoe doesn’t sleep much during the day so I had to work night-time and mostly after 11 – 12 midnite, my husband is a musician so many nights after he was coming back from work and on the days he was off, I felt like Van Gogh’s owl 🙂 The plants I have in my house are all big pots, I set my self to work in my little studio, because off all these, I thought to choose pineapple as one of the fruit, had interesting texture and leaves like I plant. I also had chosen, coconut, lotus fruits and papaya, which I decided to take out from the composition later on, you will see in my compositional studies in my sketchbook. As a bottle I used Meteus, Portuguese rose, which has interesting shape. I placed my objects on wrinkled table-cloth, I was looking almost straight and slightly down and had strong light on the right of the composition.
I knew will work on this project for few days but didn’t expect it to work for much longer, took me just over two weeks to complete it, working on and off, Â sometimes having few days pause. I didn’t expect to be like this but having a newborn I found it difficult with the time, no time for anything else but the baby. I also thought by choosing pineapple and coconut , these fruit last longer, actually not that long. Especially the coconut when is cut open only lasts for about 3 days. You will see that I had to replace the coconut twice and the pineapple once, lotus fruit lasted.
I played first placing the objects in different compositions and then started doing some sketches in my sketchbook. Bellow is a pic of the first sketch where I had chosen the pineapple, papaya, the coconut I had it broken in half to make my composition more interesting plus was getting other forms to describe and the inside texture aswell, and I placed the bottle at the back. I decided to eliminate the lotus fruits was getting to busy. Please see this composition bellow.
I did not like this composition, it didn’t fit well on the page and I was also thinking about when doing the colours on the papaya and pineapple, lots of the greens were going to be similar. I did like having cut off the picture plane though, as was also mentioned in the course book as an idea.
Bellow is the second sketch I did, to use the paper vertical, you can see I took out the papaya and added the two lotus fruits here instead.
Here is when I decided that for the objects I have chosen to draw, vertical will be better to use the paper. To make it more interesting I cropped my view with a box on the left, in front of the pineapple, that’s why you don’t see it all. but I was still not happy with my composition, my bottle didn’t fit well here, want to see it all, had to do more adjustments, my proportions were wrong here as well. I thought the pineapple to bring bit lower, and move the lotus fruits a bit to fill in the space down bit more.
I later did two more compositional studies where I did some changes moving the lotus fruits and the coconut a bit, I also tried by facing the bottle looking more to the left on the second composition. Please see picture bellow.
As you see on my notes, I was more drown to the left composition.
After this I had 3 days pause and when I came back I saw the coconut was all gone mouldy inside so I had to replace it with new one. This time it broke the other way so the two bits were more roundly, I liked it this way broken. I decided to go with the third composition which is the left on the picture above, I replaced the coconut pieces, moved the bottle looking to the right but kept the lotus fruits more like the last composition, they were filling in the space now better, was also deciding on cropping a bit one of the lotus fruit aswell in my drawing.
In my sketchbook you will see I did some pencil line and tone studies first of the objects, I found the pineapple was most challenging to describe, here is when I thought by doing first diagonal lines to find easier each bit of the texture ( please see pic bellow to see what I mean ). In my notes here I say: Pineapple, challenging texture, each bit is rising up so have to describe tones carefully, darkest bits are the inside joining lines which makes depth. Please see pic bellow of these studies.
I then decided to do preliminary drawing first by using graphite pencils on A4 cartridge paper. I used b3, b4, b5, b7, b8, and b9 pencil. For the bottle I used pencils and medium charcoal pencil, for blending I used paper stumps, for highlights kneaded gum. I first started with the pineapple, please see picture bellow.
I started from the bottom doing mid tones first and gradually building the tones. Bellow picture is of finished fruits, bottle and their cast shadows.
Bellow is day light picture of finished drawing.
I think I did ok using pencils describing the different textures, depth, contrast and forms. The left side on the bottle puts me a bit of, curve should come down bit lower, smooth texture came out good. I am also happy with the coconut and lotus textures and tone. With the pineapple I should have done better with the highlights on some bits, overall I think I managed to describe the rough texture well. I then had another pause and when I came back the coconut was gone all mouldy inside and had to replace it again. These time I decided to keep it close till I am ready to start with the final drawing.
For my final piece I decided to use coloured pencils because they would be best to describe the pineapple texture as well as the coconut. Â I knew was going to be time-consuming, I really enjoyed using them drawing the roses in one of the previous exercise. I used soft prisma coloured pencils.
I first did some colour studies in my sketchbook. Please see pictures bellow to see the colours and techniques I choose to use for the pineapple and lotus fruit.
I found it difficult to do white over dark colour, to describe highlight on the coconut, I found that if I put with little pressure white first and then going over with darker colour there where the white is darker colour doesn’t show well so this I used later in my final drawing, there where highlights are and then continued with colouring rest. I used lighter colour with little pressure over darker when blending, for example here you can see that good on the lotus fruit. I also made comment here to describe dark tones first. For the pineapple I used quite lot of colours and gradually building the tone, blending, then doing some more lines etc..
I then did some colour studies for the coconut. I tried experimenting with other media here, first sample I used coloured pencils and conte crayons first, then on top i did lines with acid free marker, then went over did some lines with oil pastels ( brown and light brown ) and again over with pencils, marker… Second sample, I used conte crayons which I didn’t like thinking how would look with the rest of the coloured pencil drawing. I wasn’t really happy with both of these studies. I tried to use other media because I found it difficult doing lighter tones over darker with coloured pencils. Please see pic bellow.
Next picture bellow is from the bottle colour study and coconut leaves. Few colours I choose to use for the bottle and leaves as well, describing the dark tones first gradually building the colours and blending with lighter colours. Please see picture bellow.
By the time I finished with the studies and one day pause, I wasn’t happy with the look of the pineapple, went all brown, so I went and bought a new one. Was difficult to choose, in the local supermarket most they had there were gone all brown aswell, there was one which I choose that had more yellows than the previous one I had and was quite interesting, same range of colours as my previous just more yellows in places.
My final piece I did on A3 size cartridge paper. I replaced the pineapple, broke and replaced the new coconut, tried breaking it the same as the previous one so I get more round bits, decide to fit in both lotus fruits, smoothed a bit the table-cloth in some places I also happen to have some paper under it you can notice more now, the way sits one of the lotus, the top one, thought was interesting.
First I did light sketch and started adding colour on the pineapple first. Please see the two pictures bellow.
Pineapple took quite few hours to finish, was working on it two nights. For the highlights I did as I tried in the studies doing white first with little pressure where highlights are and then adding rest of the colors building the tones. Picture bellow is from the second night right after I finished it, you can also see a bit from the pineapple here, I think I did quite well by choosing the right colours for it.
I was quite worried about the coconut as I wasn’t happy with my studies. After the colour studies I decided to stick with using only coloured pencils for it and after I done the pineapple, the idea of doing white first on the highlights areas and then other colours around, I thought to do this here with lighter colours first, adding with little pressure so when I went over with darker didn’t colour over well or I was also avoiding or applying lightly other colour on those areas. Two pics bellow are stages of doing the coconut.
Next picture bellow is finished coconut. I was basically experimenting here and I am actually quite happy how it turned out.
Next two pics are stages doing the lotus fruit. You can see how I first start hatching lightly the dark tones first and slowly building the colour by layering over and over and blending with lighter colour and white at the end to give that glossy shiny feel. For the highlights I did same as on the pineapple, doing white first.
2 pics bellow are stages of working on the bottle and also started working on the cast shadows and table-cloth.
You can see here for the bottle I started doing the dark tones first and white on the highlights and gradually building the tones by applying many layers of colours. After quite lot of layers of colours, for blending on top I used a colourless pencil with a bit of pressure. I am happy how it turned out, and the shape of the bottle came out much better then on my preliminary drawing, please see picture bellow of finished bottle.
For the darkest bits on the bottle and also some bits on the pineapple leaves with the dark brown I also used indigo blue.
The table-cloth is deep red colour, when I started doing it, after the first layer of colour I didn’t like how was looking. After deepening the colour, doing the shadows and cast shadows, doing the background in light creamy-beigey colour I actually quite like it now, it gives me that vantage yellow, warm look. Â Please see picture bellow of finished piece.
Overall I am happy with my final drawing. I think is improvement from my preliminary drawing. I think I used the pencils well, described textures with different mark making and techniques, shown depth, contrast and tone well. I was constantly measuring the objects with my pencil and comparing sizes, looking at the negative space, objects sizes and shapes came out good. I think I have interesting composition.
It has been challenging and time-consuming piece but well worth it! Looking forward to read my tutor’s report, comments and advice.